Ermilia’s Picture it & write (Sunday 10 March 2013)
Once again, here is my offering to ‘Picture it & write’ hosted by Ermilia (Ermisenda and Eliabeth) who invite others to join them by writing a fictional story or poem to accompany an image presented on their blog.
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It had the strangest feeling, and yet Rose wasn’t going to be deterred. She knew she had to fathom the expanse of it. She knew that if she didn’t, worlds could crumble.
Time had evolved quite slowly for Rose. She hadn’t meant this to happen; indeed she had tried, in vain, to keep up the normalcy she knew others about her conformed to. This had taken its toll upon her. She had risked many things including her life in its pursuit. If this was to be the last chance, then so be it.
She gingerly placed her hand upon it. Slowly she moved over it, aware of its fragility. It wasn’t until she saw the reflection the thought was aroused. Deep inside her consciousness was a vague memory; a memory of an element that had the capacity of reflection. Indeed, it came surging forward into her consciousness. This was the element ‘water’.
Somehow this soothed her. The memory of life upon a planet filtered into being. She recalled the vast array of wildlife, the beauty of the landscape, green and lush. Yes, the images grew more and more vivid; then the heartache as she recalled her departure. She must have been 2, perhaps 3; such a sad recollection. Vivid imaginings pervaded her mind, and yet here it was; how many years later? It seemed as though a healing was taking place. How long before it healed completely, she couldn’t tell. What she did understand was the vision was a calling; a calling to bring her home.
Carolyn Page


joetwo
/ March 12, 2013Nice take on the prompt! Good to see you back at this Carolyn!
carolynpageabc
/ March 12, 2013Thank You, Joe…
This one inspired me, and I have the time this week…
Good to see you, too…
adollyciousirony
/ March 12, 2013Very beautiful Carol
mmwahhh
carolynpageabc
/ March 12, 2013Thank You, sweet Dolly…. mmwwaaahhhhhhh to you too… xoxoxo
silentlyheardonce
/ March 12, 2013Wow! Carolyn this has such a melancholy feel to it. It kind of mimics the start of depression. You captured her longing and lost feelings so well. Wonderful job.
carolynpageabc
/ March 12, 2013Thank You, Kim… Here’s hoping it never happens…
silentlyheardonce
/ March 12, 2013From your lips to God’s ears.
sharechair
/ March 12, 2013Glad you had the time to try your hand at this. You captured feelings and you captured me.
carolynpageabc
/ March 12, 2013That’s a lovely compliment, Kathy… Thank You… xoxoxo
Yaz
/ March 12, 2013You had me hooked Carolyn. Wonderful story.
carolynpageabc
/ March 12, 2013So pleased you enjoyed it, Yaz…. As always, it’s good to see you…
Java Girl
/ March 12, 2013Wow! I’ll have to check them out to participate too!
Great blog Carolyn!!
carolynpageabc
/ March 13, 2013Yes do.. I know you will be wonderful…
tiny lessons blog
/ March 13, 2013A great take Carolyn, so multi-dimensional. So many things in there – I loved it!
carolynpageabc
/ March 13, 2013So pleased you think so..! Rose certainly Thanks You… xoxoxo
68ghia
/ March 13, 2013Quite a lovely portrayal of what you see in this picture Carol.
Beautifully done!
carolynpageabc
/ March 13, 2013Thank You, Ghia… They are always a surprise; you just never know what the imagination is going to produce… And, I love surprises…
Resa McConaghy
/ March 13, 2013It’s the opening to a sci-fi movie!!! Well done, Carolyn.
carolynpageabc
/ March 13, 2013Haven’t ventured there (Sci-fi) before… It was a lot of fun, my dear designer friend… xoxoxo
Resa McConaghy
/ March 13, 2013Kudos darling Carolyn!
xoxoxo
Maddie Cochere
/ March 13, 2013Really love your take on the picture, Carolyn. You captured so well Rose’s struggle to remember – like an elusive dream that eventually rushes in. Very nice.
carolynpageabc
/ March 13, 2013Thank You, Maddie… I think I like Rose! Isn’t it wonderful how the character can imprint their consciousness upon you as a writer… Such is the life of Susan Hunter…!
Don
/ March 13, 2013So beautifully written with an image that has such a connection with the words. Thoroughly enjoyed it Carolyn.
carolynpageabc
/ March 13, 2013Thank You, Don. That makes my little heart sing…!
rebecca2000
/ March 13, 2013Wonderful take with the prompt. You’re so talented.
carolynpageabc
/ March 13, 2013Thank You, Rebecca… and you are so gifted, fun and witty…
Anne Schilde
/ March 13, 2013Nice! Cryosleeping Beauty.
carolynpageabc
/ March 13, 2013Ha ha…. Anne… That’s a great take on the writing. You have such a wonderful imagination… xoxoxo
deanabo
/ March 13, 2013You are an amazing storyteller!
carolynpageabc
/ March 13, 2013And you, my dear Deana, and you….. xoxoxo
nightlake
/ March 13, 2013this was lovely, Carolyn. so glad to see you posting again:)
carolynpageabc
/ March 13, 2013Thank You, Padmini….
So little time these days and yet, I cannot stay away for long…!
rose
/ March 13, 2013That’s a very interesting story, and well written – it spikes my curiosity.
carolynpageabc
/ March 13, 2013Great, Rose…. You know I used your name quite consciously; so I’m glad you enjoyed it..!
The Hook
/ March 14, 2013And what a wonderful offering it was, Carolyn!
carolynpageabc
/ March 14, 2013Why, Thank You, my dear Hook…
sharmishtha basu
/ March 15, 2013simply amazing Carolyn!
carolynpageabc
/ March 15, 2013Thank You, Sharmishtha… Your comments mean a lot to me…
soumyav
/ March 16, 2013Beauty in words Carolyn! It really created an image in itself of the story!
carolynpageabc
/ March 17, 2013Thank You, Soumyav; so pleased you enjoyed…
angelswhisper2011
/ March 17, 2013Great story, great picture
carolynpageabc
/ March 17, 2013Maybe you’ll have a go at this yourself, one day… You’re a great ‘storyteller’…
Dace
/ March 21, 2013amazing..you do have your way with words again. How come you always suck me in? ( I mean it in a good way)
Love this one…
carolynpageabc
/ March 21, 2013Now that’s a great comment….
Love this one…